Monday, October 12, 2009

Descriptive Essay

A date with my boyfriend
1) Introduction: Walking through providencia
2) Paragraph: the daily walk at his side
3) Paragraph: food or ice cream
4) Walking through villasuncion
5) Conclusion: why do I choose this topic

A Date with my boyfriend
It is a cloudy day. It is perfect to hang out with my boy friend the yellow and hot sunlight will not be a problem to go out. It is five o’clock and the scented aroma from the food that my mom bought is disappearing. I just have something to say as the hand of the clock goes on: It is time to go out. The grey color of the sky is agreeable and the weather is not hot anymore. The grass and the branches at the top of the trees are rocking because of the fresh wind. I am in front of the bus stop there is just a long red way to walk through.

I take the green bus and I arrive to my destination faster than I thought. Finally I am in front of his big and blue house. He is waiting for me outside. I take his soft and warm hand as we walk through the broken streets. The noise from the traffic jam becomes nothing because of the good conversation. Cars of all colors and shapes come and go. The windy breeze goes though our black hair until we arrive to our next destination Villasuncion

Villasuncion this mall is full of other interesting places, There is a plenty of salty and sweet food. It is fantastic being able to smell all those odors, the melted cheese from pizza, the crunchy and toasted read from subway and why not to say it? the oily aroma of donuts and chocolate together but the best part is going to Fabricas de Francia, The aroma from new clothes, the color of the giant rugs and the fragrance from chocolate makes it unique; we usually go there to eat some gummies and crispy chocolate flakes.

After a good meal we use to return home. We walk through the brilliant and flat floor of villasuncion to arrive to the bus stop. Aromas disappear again as we walk away. The sky is clear and the pink sunset appears. Lots of people are waiting for the bus; their whispers will be always disturbing or calm. The green bus has arrived again, we take it as we see new edifices, it is time to home.

The long red path is walked again, children’s laughter is present along they way because of the hour, and finally we are at home. A date with my boyfriend is always funny and full of surprises, it is cool when we get hungry and we have a lot of money to spend in food, but the best part is spend time with him. He is so calm and funny; I hope I can spend more time with him in the future

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